Analysis of What a Windy Day

Jasmin Jay 2004 (Riverside California)



met a man
he called me lover
moved away
his heart grew farther

called him twice
texted him thrice
even emailed his sister

he's like the wind now
feelings blown away
drifting towards another
oh how his heart can sway

WAIT!
he's texted me!
It's been a year!
and finally, it's here!

its.....
a question
a query
a plead

he's asking for advice
about the breeze
that took him to his knees...


Scheme XABA CCA XBAB XDXX XXDX CEE
Poetic Form
Metre 101 11110 101 11110 111 111 1001110 11011 10101 1001010 111111 1 111 1101 010011 1 010 010 01 110101 0101 111111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 364
Words 72
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted on March 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jasmin Jay

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