Analysis of There Once Was A Man ~ Aug. 25, 2020



There once was a man who they say was born to lead
    But when the time came, he told them no.
Many, to him, began to beg and to plead
    Saying they'd follow wherever he'd go.

Finally, he caved and cruel he was.
    "To me, you are as expendable as the sand.
I fill your bellies with pheasants and doves.
    You want me to lead, well here I am.

And now forever you shall labor.
    From dawn to dusk in the mines, you'll toil,
Til the days of old, you start to savor
    And you come begging me for lighting oil.

Should dissent within ever arise,
    I will cause your children to die before your eyes.
As at death's door do you lie,
    You'll forever toil 'til you die."

There once was a man they say was born to lead.
    Under their pressure, he finally gave in.
That's when they saw he was cruel and mean
    And they began to regret the power they gave to him.


Scheme ABXB XXXX CDCD EEFF AXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Metre 111011111111 110111111 10110111011 1011001011 1001101011 111110100101 1111011001 111111111 010101110 111100111 1011111110 0111011101 101011001 111110110111 1111111 10101111 11101111111 10110110010 1111111001 01011010101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 903
Words 168
Sentences 13
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted by RoseofVenus on March 18, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Cheyenne Seaman

Born in PA in 2003. Raised in NC. Love to read. Mother, first & foremost. Poet & Story Writer. Carpenter, Tutor, Babysitter, Sister, Daughter. more…

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