Analysis of Your Gym



What's it like that gym of yours?
Does it warrant the abandonment of chores?
Are you satisfied with what you do?
Are you seeking that something new?

Is equipment new lovely and neat?
Serving the body the arms and feet,
Whatever you require does it manifest your dreams?,
It is effective and all that it seems?

Check the facilities parking and such,
What about hygiene  things you touch?
Assess the environment is it what you expect?
Take the time to visit and inspect.

Study your contract what do you get?
Consider the fees are they fixed and set?
Know the instructors the management as well,
Do they enhance where you will dwell?

Outlook is important also space and time,
Enjoy the companionship and get along fine,
Once you're committed you will truly belong,
Establishing a habit lasting a lifetime long.


Scheme XXAA BBCC DDEE FFGG XXHH
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111111 11100010011 11101111 11101101 101011001 100100101 10110111011 1101001111 1001001001 1011111 0100100111101 101110001 10111111 0100111101 10010010011 11011111 1101010101 01001001011 11010111001 010001010011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 788
Words 140
Sentences 15
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 129
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted by RowAroundTheMoon on October 15, 2013

Modified on April 19, 2023

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stan brierly

I have been writing poems for forty years and written about all sorts of things. Somehow I get creating streaks and can write up to 4 or 5 poems at once of varying subjects. I find it is a good way to record events of the day and bring history to life.The mental aspect is a balance against keeping fit,work and life in general. more…

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