Analysis of Your Cold Indifference



I’m going to break,
I’m going to fall
with no one below
to catch me.
Watch my life
slipping like sand
from my fingers,
from my lungs.
I look to you
with watery eyes,
with pain and loss,
and you turn from me.
Your cold indifference,
your iced-over beliefs
are slowly killing me,
awakening a new person.


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Metre 11011 11011 11101 111 111 1011 1110 111 1111 11001 1101 01111 110100 111001 110101 01000110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 290
Words 57
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 232
Words per stanza (avg) 57
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kassandra M. Konecny

Kassandra Konecny is a lover of listening to music, hiking in the mountains, and observing the way people act. She began writing vigorously when she was fourteen and will hopefully never stop. She has had her fair share of trials lately, and tries to encompass nearly every subject there is to study into her writing. Kassandra plans to study creative writing and psychology. She's 17 and currently lives in Utah with her family. Contact her at kassandrakonecny@hotmail.com more…

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