Analysis of Young Adam-Old Eve



adharay,adharay awendhokar
arti caday aweneck rath
darkness,darkness,pitch-black night
arti cries mostly at nights-
neath the blanket of virginal sky
adharay,adharay awendhokar
Durriya hesitates,trembles,weeps
young adam,old eve-undresses shaking she her
daisies,daffodils-tulips get torn and tuned
as the tornado piercing,blowing pacify her
loveflute(tube)
adharay,adharay awendhokar arti caday aweneck
rath!cups after cups whiskey hush,hush
cats on hot tin tubs;nicotine carves out
nude,naked lust coiling against the ceiling
that shuns shrines,sins,suns
come on alaknanda;come on,come on,on and on
burn,burn,burn-desire of daffodils weaken
all fun-today I eat you;tomorrow I die
arti,arti,arti,let there be light


Scheme AbcdeAdafagehijdklec
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 11 1111 111 111011 101011001 11 11 11111010 1101101 10011100 11 11111 1101101 1111111 11101010 111 1111101 101011010 110111111 1111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 696
Words 114
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 594
Words per stanza (avg) 89
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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