Analysis of You must open



You must open your window
Give access and allow
I shall touch the idle nerve
That may ideally serve

The poetry may come into life again
Just too express agony and pain
But you shall be revived
In world again to be survived

Poetry is never written in sleep
That gospel must be in mind to keep
As it may surface with little impetus
You are back again in life for us

Don't die virgin
As it has no meaning
Life has to offer flowers
With beautiful rainy showers

You may dream and want
Beautiful company and chant
Love songs with wind's blow
You shall be carried away with love's flow


Scheme AXBB XXCC DDEE XXFF XXAA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (25%)
Quatrain  (20%)
Metre 1110110 11001 1110101 110101 01001101101 110110001 111101 01011101 1001101001 110110111 11110110100 111010111 1110 111110 1111010 11001010 11101 10010001 11111 1111001111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 559
Words 111
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on October 16, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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