Analysis of You Can Go Now (599)
I thought you are mine
And true like vine;
But little I know
You are taboo.
How do I know?
Here's the reason why;
When I hold u in my arms,
I am not in your mind;
My desire are all just for you,
No matter how you put me through;
In-spite of all the trouble
I bear it all for you;
But everything I do
It's all nothing to you;
You are the one I love;
A consent from above;
But little I know
I'm just a fool like you;
Longing for love
That it don't mean for me and you.
You can leave now
From my view
I can bear this pain
Alone without you.
I'm leaving this chamber...,
And release our love above;
I shall built a monument,
A reminder that we are free from each other at last !
Yah! Free at last!!!
I shall paint our memories
In the grey canvass;
I shall living back
To my old self
Back in time before
I tasted your sweet
companionship.
By Ms. Ging Alburo D.
2014
Scheme | aaBc bxxx ccxccc ddBcdc xcxc xdxe e xxxxxxx xx |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111 0111 11011 1101 1111 10101 1111011 111011 101011111 11011111 0111010 111111 11011 111011 110111 001101 11011 110111 1011 11111101 1111 111 11111 01011 110110 00110101 1110100 00101111111011 1111 11110100 00110 11101 1111 10101 11011 010 11111 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 830 |
Words | 179 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 6, 6, 4, 4, 1, 7, 2 |
Lines Amount | 38 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 72 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 20 |
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