Analysis of You Are My Sender



Stopped for a word or two, took my heart
never knew you, looked at me, blew me apart
That little smile, no joke ...unless on me
may find out, If you tell me ...wait and see.

My feelings grow, think you know ...already there
Could be the reason, for the smile ...know I care
been there and back, you know it best ...to wait
why so long, must be better ...to go for fate.

The way things are, no change of heart ...fine
If love is true, our hearts they sit ...on a goldmine
Life is waiting ...eternity, Is our best friend
If you wish, a kiss right now ...by thought I send.

I smile, with reason ...you thought a kiss
when I see you, do you know ...you'll never miss
Course you do, the little wave ...tells me so
then you say, what I never hear ...I think I know.

Bobby ferguson 2012.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH X
Poetic Form
Metre 110111111 10111111101 1101110111 1111111101 11011110101 11010101111 1101111111 11111101111 011111111 111110111101 1110010011011 11101111111 111101101 11111111101 1110101111 111111011111 10100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 764
Words 154
Sentences 19
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on December 01, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Bobby Ferguson

Samantha Summer or Alan Ostrow take it in turns to pimp all poetry on here, who's pimping you both cant a $50 bucks a night and $40 to your pimps who throw you about between them all then send you here, If it's that good what are you doing on this site, pimped by pimps, lol more…

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