Analysis of Wife



100503 21 prayers fruit and fall off my
Sinful lips
21 tears tear,tore open my coffin
O lo!Hark!Behold!
What I see a marvellous dream
A girl beateous,bold,unforeseenbefore
jumped out of her mother`s birth-spring!
And O now she`s 21;she is
Especially in the October Wind
Sun shines on my vineyards
Moon shines on my ships
My shadows to shadows weep to see arti unfurl
her tulips of 21-spring
Uninvited,unfed I lay like a dog w/ no meals
She dances away the Moon,the magics
My packs of Parliament wail and weep
Shouldering on the shaky shoulders of Jack
Daniels,Chivas and Whiskey
I walk,I walk aimless,lonely
O sweetest wife, arti, please let me in,in,in,in


Scheme ABCDEFGHDIBJGKBLMNJC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 110111 101 1110110 11 111011 011 1110111 011111 010000101 111110 11111 1111111101 01011 11110110011 11001011 111100101 10010101011 1010 1111 110111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 637
Words 125
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 525
Words per stanza (avg) 111
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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