Analysis of Why



Why did you come back, if you didn't want to stay?
My feelings are real and not for you to play
Why do I still love you and still care a lot?
It's something I'm pondering; an interesting thought.

Don't tell me you miss me and want me to write
When most of the time you stay out of my sight
I want to be caring, understanding and nice.
In your absence - this relationship? - I'm questioning it twice!

I don't understand; why do I still care ?
When all I can feel is immense despair.
My feelings are waning and in time will be gone.
Then you'll probably be wondering where you went wrong.

James Barnett - April 2012


Scheme AAXX BBCC DDXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 111111110111 11011011111 11111101101 110110011001 11111101111 11101111111 11111001001 01101010110011 110111111 1111110101 110110001111 1110011001111 10110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 601
Words 120
Sentences 11
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted by Jbarnett on July 07, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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