Why (This poem has been reported for abuse and is under review) ????



Why did you come back, if you didn't want to stay?
My feelings are real and not for you to play
Why do I still love you and still care a lot?
It's something I'm pondering; an interesting thought.

Don't tell me you miss me and want me to write
When most of the time you stay out of my sight
I want to be caring, understanding and nice.
In your absence - this relationship? - I'm questioning it twice!

I don't understand; why do I still care ?
When all I can feel is immense despair.
My feelings are waning and in time will be gone.
Then you'll probably be wondering where you went wrong.

James Barnett - April 2012
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Submitted by Jbarnett on February 02, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXX BBCC DDXX X
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 601
Words 120
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1

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