Analysis of When You Hold Me In Your Arms I Feel Like I'm At Home



Castles Of Sand
When you build castles of sand I feel like I'm a king
There's no majesty as grand
Resplendent everything
When you take my hand in yours I feel like I'm attached
There's no one I'd rather see
Past numbers all are scratched
When you croon romantic tunes I feel like I'm the flame
There's no fire I'd rather light
A heart deserves acclaim
When you press your lips to mine I feel like I'm complete
There's no mouth I'd rather kiss
These charms amply entreat
When you fantasize great plans I feel like I'm the dream
There's no plot I'd rather frame
Aristocratic scheme
When you hold me in your arms I feel like I'm at home
There's no place I'd rather be
No need to stray or roam


Scheme ABABCDCEFEGHAIEIJDJ
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 1111011111101 1110011 01010 1111101111101 1111101 110111 1110101111101 11101101 010101 1111111111101 1111101 11101 111011111101 1111101 00101 1111011111111 1111101 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 671
Words 132
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 541
Words per stanza (avg) 132
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Submitted on January 02, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Wallace Dean LaBenne

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