Analysis of When are you going to be mine



Words can't express my
love for you for there
simply is no measure
the hours i spend with
you are filled with neverending
pleasure the sun sets upon
ocean just as my heart has set
on you.you are the air that
i breathe a ray of light breaking
through you've filled life with
wonder with all the love you
brought my way my soul has
found the perfect partner
i love you more and more
each day.I miss out on a good
thing it want come back.
Don't let me fly away from
you.It time for you to make a
move on me what stop you.Do you want
me to be your woman?


Scheme ABCDEFGHEDIJCKLEMNOP
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11011 11111 101110 010111 11111 1001101 10111111 111011 11011110 11111 1011011 111111 100110 111101 1111101 11111 1111011 1111110 11111111 111110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 531
Words 117
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 429
Words per stanza (avg) 113
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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