Analysis of What You Do To Me



When I'm not sad you make me cry.
When I'm not depressed you send my soul into a world of hell.
When I'm angry you make me cuss.
When my smile is big and bright you make it fade away.
When my eyes shine with love you make them fall.

I hate you.

But do I love you?


Scheme XXXXX A A
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 111011111010111 11101111 1111101111101 1111111111 111 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 257
Words 58
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 1, 1
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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doodlegirl

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