Analysis of We gave in



We gave in

We know one thing for sure
Life is treasure
And gifted by almighty god
To spread his message with kind words

We also know that it has ups and down
Some are creation of our own
Some are faced from unknown quarter
Some are thrust upon and not sought after

We go on struggling
And smiling
But not leaving ground
Till something is found

One thing was certain
The dignity was to be maintained
Along with labor and pain
That was main aim

So we gave in to fact
And added acts
For survival
As well as for revival


Scheme X XAXX XXAA BBCC XXXX XXDD
Poetic Form
Metre 110 111111 1110 01010101 11110111 1101111101 110101101 11110110 1110101110 111100 010 11101 11011 11110 010011101 0111001 1111 111011 0101 1010 1111010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 495
Words 102
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 69
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on March 25, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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