Analysis of Virginia Marvene Hixon



Years ago, as I stood in your kitchen
in green neon socks and first-bra bravado
I did not care that you were born
in a cabin on top of Lookout Mountain.
Your smell of mothballs and Lady Stetson
lulled me to sleep
and my droopy eyes were not surprised when
you drove to the store in second gear.
Years later I would learn of the
red hot talent that took you
from Alabama to New York for an exhibit
of your own. Perhaps the slow train ride
back is what makes you question my weight
or my complexion.
Now, looking at your painting of the cabin
on Lookout Mountain, my feet
wider and flatter from the weight of my own train rides, I wonder:
If I look close enough, can I see through
the window into your room?


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Poetic Form
Metre 1011110110 01101011010 11111101 0010111110 111101010 1111 0110101011 111010101 11011110 1110111 101011111010 111010111 111111011 11010 11011101010 111011 1001010111111110 1111011111 0100111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 687
Words 138
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 556
Words per stanza (avg) 138
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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