Analysis of Venom of God



Without that catchy name.
pretty face
where would you be?
Nowhere, baby
Without your tight physique...
just meat
with breast implants
in candy pants
Shallow as a mud puddle
Don't deserve a second chance

They don't yet have a word for your condition
but most will refer to you as
the victim
I am the venom of god

You think you're alive?
You're only prey to me
You think you're alive?
You'll beg to die quickly
I can see the way
you'll taste and feel
your body bears this demon seal

I am the venom of god
headed straight to your heart
I don't need to touch you
to tear your apart


Scheme xxaaxxbbxx xxxC DaDaxee Cfxf
Poetic Form Tetractys  (32%)
Metre 011101 101 1111 110 011101 11 1101 0101 1010110 1010101 11110111010 11101111 010 1101011 11101 110111 11101 111110 11101 1101 11011101 1101011 101111 111111 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 553
Words 112
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 10, 4, 7, 4
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Wesley Morin

I was borne in the soul of misery and I never had me a name... they just gave me a number when I was young... ***BANNED IN A HUNDRED THOUSAND COUNTRIES*** more…

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