Analysis of Unrevealed love



Unrevealed love
With in my heart

Every moment I was at bay
My aura was grey

Green leaves seemed brown
Flowers with frangance seemed no smell

I felt wriggling llike an eel
With a frozen feel

Time ticked
Days passed

Ray of hope radiated
Day dawned brightly
Cuckoo singing
Whistling cheers I wanted to reveal my love

But my revealing of love was in vain
I closed my eyes and told myself that God is with me


Scheme AX BB XX CC XX XDXA XD
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1011 100101111 11011 1111 1011111 111111 10101 11 11 111100 1110 110 10111010111 1101011101 111101111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 389
Words 78
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 47
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted on April 22, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shobha Raman

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