Unrevealed love



Unrevealed love
With in my heart

Every moment I was at bay
My aura was grey

Green leaves seemed brown
Flowers with frangance seemed no smell

I felt wriggling llike an eel
With a frozen feel

Time ticked
Days passed

Ray of hope radiated
Day dawned brightly
Cuckoo singing
Whistling cheers I wanted to reveal my love

But my revealing of love was in vain
I closed my eyes and told myself that God is with me

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Submitted on April 22, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Characters 389
Words 78
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4, 2

Shobha Raman

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