Analysis of Unlit



Unlit the room as my eye is unclosed

Unseen your body tenderly stirs

Whispering warm lengths of delicious wind

Anticipating and consuming one and then next

Graciously devouring each gust

Inhaling with it your aspiration

Our minds imminent and coupled

My reflections and dreams visit with yours and yours with mine

Rigid hearts dissolve with each breath

Each breath blending and sharing our souls

Our souls sweetening with every gust

Unlit the room

Unclosed still, my eye


Scheme A X A A A X A X X X A X X
Poetic Form
Metre 10111111 011101001 1001110101 010000101011 100010011 010111010 101100010 10100110110111 10101111 1110010101 10110011001 101 1111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 458
Words 77
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 30
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Dean Cunningham

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