Analysis of Two suns in two tears
Once there was a man in a well.
That was a great hell,a horrible cell.
The well was so deep and dark.
In his eyes there was no light to spark.
The well was so stuffy and cold .
He got no notch to hold.
His weak cries echoed all the night.
There he had no power to fight.
Tales of prophets came to his mind.
Ibraheem the prophet was the first to think.
He knew God told fire to be cool and safe.
Then in his eyes some gleam started to wink.
Ibraheem was thrown into a fiery furnace
As the cruel Nemrud stayed in his palace.
With God’s help the fire was cool.
As it became garden of roses
Nemrud seemed a great fool.
There was Yunus in his thought.
To that man that story was brought.
It was Yunus trapped in a huge fish.
To be safe was his only wish.
Thrown into a well likeYusuf.
His misery was his proof.
Then to him there came a hand to aid.
For hours in the well this man prayed.
This man prostrated on the ground.
It was the best moment to be crowned.
As two tear drops were shed.
He realized he was alive not dead.
God said ‘be’ and there it was
It was two tears becoming two suns.
They were enough to brighten the well.
Lifting his head up this man felt well.
This was the source of a new hope
Thrown for him,this was a strong rope.
Scheme | AABB CCDD XEFE GGHXH IIJJ FXKK LLMM XXAA NN |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 11101001 110111001 0111101 011111111 01111001 111111 11110101 11111011 11101111 101010111 11111011101 1011111011 11101010010 1010110110 11101011 110110110 11011 111011 11111011 11110011 11111101 101011 1100111 111110111 110001111 111101 110110111 111101 110110111 1110111 111101011 100111001 101111111 11011011 1111011 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,210 |
Words | 253 |
Sentences | 31 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 106 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 28 |
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Submitted on July 26, 2017
Modified on March 05, 2023
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