Analysis of Tribute to Deadly Attack in Peshawar (Poem No 516)




Tribute to the deadly incident at Peshawar
Happened on March 18, 2013.

Today is the day I would never forget,
For the news I have heard
that my Sweet friend is in the verge of death.
A loaded terrorist manage to access the place,
and blew themselves near the judiciary place.

Poor Sweet of mine, were in the midst of gun fire,
He never expect if he would survived.
Thank God for my answered prayers,
To keep himself safe in the midst of danger.

Lying on the ground and play dead,
was the best thing in life he did.
Some people were not fortunate,
For they were running in panic
while there were cross fire
Between the officers, and the suicidal terrorist.

Not too long I stated, to my Sweet,
"Be very careful at your work place,
for it is government facilities,
it might be the target of the terrorist."
And It happened, when  I thought it would happen.

I am deeply in sorrow knowing
what he hath gone through on Monday
At the first day of his work at the court.

What a catastrophic site to see,
When the busy city turn into battle field
As the bomb blast without mercy.
My heart goes with those families of the unfortunate,
Lying on the streets innocent of their death.

What a pain to witness such amiss in life.
I understand the pain and anger
and possible post traumatic stress disorder, will occur;
But vengeance is not ours but for God;
He takes note of everything,
Of what the Devil  did to our fellowmen.

Time will come, everyone will stand,
Before the judgement and give account
before the King of the Universe
On the final day of reckoning.

At the main time, woe to this earth that we live in,
For the devil controls the atmosphere.
The love of money, self, and selfishness,
Hath gone viral to most of every humans quest;
Instead of showing love, and kindness,
To everyone who reside in this planet.

The souls of many been cheaply sold...
and the heart of many hath gone cold.

Let us take the warning of God seriously;
" Be sober be vigilant, for the devil
is like a roaring lion seeking whom
they may devour."

After all, our life is just like a smoke.
In a moment we visually appear,
And can be gone in a swift of an air.

But we shall behold Him,
In a twinkling of an eye;
Face to face with our savior Divine.

For, "at the sound of the trumpet,
The dead in Christ shall rise."
And the grave will open
Death can't keep us in Hades.

So beloved, ladies and gentleman,
Be faithful till He comes.
Let us not be overcome with hate,
anger, malice and revenge;
time will come there will be peace
In the valley for you and me.

Let us encourage our fellow men
Not to do evil but do good to every one.

Author
Ms.Ging
March 21,2013

Today, March 31rst 2013,

He added more information the whole truth of the situation.
The worse I thought , I did not know he's wounded.
He did not tell me everything back then,
He waited till its getting better, to tell,
because he is concerned,
I might be worry and feel the pain.
He is the one that is hurting,
 and still thinking of me and my well being.
A person like him is rare
I'm glad we are best friend.
I love him more than anything.
I pray for His complete healing.
He is a man of his word.
To have a friend like him,
who need someone else?


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Poetic Form
Metre 1010101001100 1011 01101111001 101111 1111100111 010100101101 01011001001 111100011110 1100111101 1111101 11011001110 10101011 10110111 11001100 11010010 110110 01010000010100 111110111 110101111 1111000100 11101010100 01101111110 111001010 11111110 1011111101 10010111 101010101101 10110110 11111100100100 10101100111 10111010101 10101010 010010101010101 1101110111 111110 1101011101 1111011 010100101 01011010 101011100 101111111110 101001010 0111010100 1110111100101 011101010 1101010110 011101101 001110111 111010111000 11011001010 1101010101 11010 10110111101 0010110001 0111001111 111011 00100111 1111101001 11011010 010111 001110 1111010 101100100 110111 11111011 1010001 1111111 00101101 1101010101 1111011111001 10 1 1 0111 110101001110010 01111111110 111111011 11011101011 011101 111100101 11011110 01101101110 0101111 111111 1111110 11110110 1101111 110111 1111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 3,094
Words 611
Sentences 38
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 2, 5, 4, 6, 5, 3, 5, 6, 4, 6, 2, 4, 3, 3, 4, 6, 2, 3, 1, 15
Lines Amount 89
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ging Alburo D.

Hi Everyone! This is Ging not so tall and not so short. I came from a big family of Ten and I am the last fruit of my parents love on the first set of seven siblings. My family describe me as friendly, lively, lovely and poetic and funny; this is when I was at home in my native land and speak my own language and dialect. I speak two languages, three dialects and two dialect that I can understand but I can't speak very well. another extras,I can read Spanish but can't understand all the words, I speak few sentence. I love most of the sports and I was involved in sports during my younger years. I have passion in music and acting during my High school and college years. Graduated From O.T.C In B.S.E.ED. I started my Master but did not continue it...Its to be continued...:)I love to sing and play instruments like: guitar, piano, Auto Harp,ukelele, banjo and trying an accordion. I love life, I love to smile and laugh. I love to imagine and to dreams. I like to keep busy not sitting and doing nothing. I love vegetarian food and fruits and water to drink. I love people and I am people person. Honesty is the best policy for me. I like to be around trust worthy, Spiritual and God fearing people.I believe in simplicity is beauty,Simple but terrible ...:) I am curious person...I dislike critical, hateful person. CRITICISM without love brings destruction and LOVE without criticism brings stagnation. You have to learn to balance it. I like poetry because its an expression of our inner soul. Words that sweetly and wisely spoken are precious than silver or gold. I was told by the people when I was little, I am poet, and My Sweet told me, I have potential to be good poet if I will develop it. When I was invited to join this site, I was excited. I was motivated by the promise gift.Hehehehe When I was in high school around 10 t0 14 years old, I did not much pay attention about it, We were required to submit at least Five to Ten poems to be written in our native language; I was in panic because I waited at the last minute;So I have to ask my Sweet Aunt to help me and come up with more poems, because I had only done a four pieces.:) She was pity with me, so she agreed. In one day.., we're able to come up with the minimum requirements. Yikes! it was a close call!:) I was so pleased that the teacher was very please of the writings and my choice of words. Hehehe and she love it.:) Thanks to the founder of this poetry site, that encourage everyone to share what's in their heart and of course with the rules to follow, and review each other and help one another encourage each other. I am kind of addicted to poetry, I could not sleep when words are floating waiting to be capture. I have to get up and write it, and follow up the next day.By the way, I am sharing the Different types of Poetry, to remind you and myself of the different type so that we will have a better ideas what to write. And when we review others writing, we can understand and we can give a good judgement, kind and fair. Let us Respect each others work, Put your feet on others shoes, Look at the meaning beyond the saying of the poem, leave a comment in assertive way that will encourage me or someone to keep writing and sharing. Here is the following types of poetry: 1. Limerick- A short, humorous poem composed of 5 lines. It has rhyme scheme of aabba. 2. Haiku- A Japanese poem made up of 3 lines with a syllable pattern of 5-7-5 . Concrete- A poem that takes the shape of the poem's topic. 4. Couplet- A two-lined rhyming poem. 5. Diamante- A poem a 7 lines that begins with one noun and ends with that noun's opposite. 6. Free-verse- Poetry that does not contain regular patterns of rhythm or rhyme. Hurray! Just reach the Legendary level as I set to be reach exactly midnight of May 3rd 2012.:) Good morning to myself thanks to all the supporters.:) Hope you will reach yours too. and by the way, My Pin arrived today May 3;12.:)TY My heart flip flops! hehehe wink! I am on Tag site. Welcome to add me. I'm the founder of "You are not alone club get advice, in yahoo." You are invited to join in.:) http://groups.yahoo.com/group/youarenotalonegetadvice/join Let me know.:) Thank you for reading. Take care yourself. Be happy, easy go lucky. God bless. more…

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