Analysis of tonight I found you



New to this moment,
Softness in your eyes,
I pull you closer,
Comfort is where we lie.

Try but you can't,
To give your heart away,
You clench and you hold,
That's your only way.

Anxious for this time,
Anticipate your every move,
Nervousness fills the air,
Softly spoken to soothe.

Eyes searching for something,
Looking deep within me,
To fulfill a dream,
Only you can see.

Close eyes lightly now,
No sight is needed,
Only fingers to touch,
Where pain is depleted.

There deep inside of you,
Stirs an empty hole,
That life kept pouring,
That cracked your soul.

But tonight sits now,
Is broken heart mending,
Tonight is the night,
As love is pending.

Waiting to decide on,
Sending signals by code,
Only time will interpret,
Doorway open or close.

Eyes sit open wide,
Speaking into the dark,
A reflection of me,
Looking through to your heart.

Words wished to speak,
Tongue you held tight,
But actions spoke more,
I found you tonight.

I proceeded with caution,
And waited on you,
Your patience stood still,
Eyes decided, they drew.

A map to feel,
To what you knew as true,
Behind your perfect kiss,
Whispers I love you.


Scheme XXXX XAXA XXXX BCXC DXXX EFBF DBGB XXXX XXCX XGXG XEXE XEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (58%)
Metre 11110 10011 11110 101111 1111 111101 11011 11101 10111 01011001 100101 101011 110110 101011 10101 10111 11101 11110 101011 111010 110111 11101 11110 1111 10111 110110 01101 11110 10111 101011 1011010 11011 11101 100101 001011 101111 1111 1111 11011 11101 1010110 01011 11011 11011 0111 111111 011011 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,067
Words 199
Sentences 12
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 72
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on March 03, 2017

Modified on March 21, 2023

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Holly Szurczynski

Alot of my poems are about my past,what I've been through or what I may be focusing on. One of my close friends inspired me to write. He said for as much as I told him, I should put into poems. I'm glad I did.I never realized how much I was keeping inside until I started writing, wow, so much comes out. more…

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