Analysis of Title of PoemII MY WORDS STAND WHEN I AM LONELY II by Satya pattnaik
II MY WORDS STAND WHEN I AM LONELY II by Satya pattnaik
I am in the crowd
Silent, lonely without music and shadow
Only cold and iced being cowered many times
No doubt I was lost, melted and roasted
Ruined neglected and treated as a dustbin
Many times
I lost my voices, life smell
The green dust of my sandy roads that I had
To greet the glow of purest one
In the depth of darkness I was scared
And shaken remain unanswered
No doubt many times
All I did own and taken into granted
For the selfish wish of time
With my tears and smiles
Though I knew that it was not of mine
But I bleed up and accepted it many times
Divine depth drifted away
Brooks inside my heart became hollow and dark
Happy soul lost her wings
Taking this chance my mortal friend stood up
And warned!! Hey you are not musing with poetry
Only juggling with words, a juggler of encyclopaedia
Only to confuse, he cursed me in his pride
I made my creation blind, pained inside, punished
To mock at me self-empting my heart unwillingly
Paraded, scattered, floated
And in abundance of lust I died many times
No doubt my sweet pains suffered
Love flood Pulsating heart stiffened
Dreams crossed between grey depths of time
Despite all, my selfish wings succeeded
And flied without being rebellious to the comments
Of dollar earned hearts and plastic coated thoughts
Many times
But I did not ache more because
The spirit of my words did not separate me
Turned to me touched and cares me
Cleaned my way to delight all the way
And not left me alone in the crowd
To be abused many times.
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I am in the crowd
Silent, lonely without music and shadow
Only cold and iced being cowered many times
No doubt I was lost, melted and roasted
Ruined neglected and treated as a dustbin
Many times
I lost my voices, life smell
The green dust of my sandy roads that I had
To greet the glow of purest one
In the depth of darkness I was scared
And shaken remain unanswered
No doubt many times
All I did own and taken into granted
For the selfish wish of time
With my tears and smiles
Though I knew that it was not of mine
But I bleed up and accepted it many times
Divine depth drifted away
Brooks inside my heart became hollow and dark
Happy soul lost her wings
Taking this chance my mortal friend stood up
And warned!! Hey you are not musing with poetry
Only juggling with words, a juggler of encyclopaedia
Only to confuse, he cursed me in his pride
I made my creation blind, pained inside, punished
To mock at me self-empting my heart unwillingly
Paraded, scattered, floated
And in abundance of lust I died many times
No doubt my sweet pains suffered
Love flood Pulsating heart stiffened
Dreams crossed between grey depths of time
Despite all, my selfish wings succeeded
And flied without being rebellious to the comments
Of dollar earned hearts and plastic coated thoughts
Many times
But I did not ache more because
The spirit of my words did not separate me
Turned to me touched and cares me
Cleaned my way to delight all the way
And not left me alone in the crowd
To be abused many times.
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Scheme | a BCDEFD GHIJKD ELMND OAPQRST UREDKVLEWXD YRROBD BCDEFD GHIJKD ELMND OAPQRST UREDKVLEWXD YRROBD |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111111011101 11001 1010011001 10101101101 1111110010 100100101010 101 1111011 01111101111 11011101 001110111 0100110 11101 11110100110 1010111 11101 111111111 111100101101 0111001 10111011001 101101 1011110111 011111101100 10100110100100100 10101111011 111010110110 1111110110100 0101010 000101111101 1111110 1110110 11011111 0111101010 0101100101010 11011010101 101 11111101 01011111101 1111011 111101101 011101001 1101101 1 1 11001 1010011001 10101101101 1111110010 100100101010 101 1111011 01111101111 11011101 001110111 0100110 11101 11110100110 1010111 11101 111111111 111100101101 0111001 10111011001 101101 1011110111 011111101100 10100110100100100 10101111011 111010110110 1111110110100 0101010 000101111101 1111110 1110110 11011111 0111101010 0101100101010 11011010101 101 11111101 01011111101 1111011 111101101 011101001 1101101 1 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 3,166 |
Words | 570 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 13 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 6, 6, 5, 7, 11, 8, 6, 6, 5, 7, 11, 8 |
Lines Amount | 87 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 188 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 44 |
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Submitted on May 21, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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