Title of PoemII MY WORDS STAND WHEN I AM LONELY II by Satya pattnaik



II   MY WORDS STAND WHEN I AM LONELY II    by Satya pattnaik

I am in the crowd
Silent, lonely without music and shadow
Only cold and iced being cowered many times
No doubt I was lost, melted and roasted
Ruined neglected and treated as a dustbin
Many times

I lost my voices, life smell
The green dust of my sandy roads that I had
To greet the glow of purest one
In the depth of darkness I was scared
And shaken remain unanswered
No doubt many times

All I did own and taken into granted
For the selfish wish of time
With my tears and smiles
Though I knew that it was not of mine
But I bleed up and accepted it many times

Divine depth drifted away
Brooks inside my heart became hollow and dark
Happy soul lost her wings
Taking this chance my mortal friend stood up
And warned!! Hey you are not musing with poetry
Only juggling with words, a juggler of encyclopaedia
Only to confuse, he cursed me in his pride

I made my creation blind, pained inside, punished
 To mock at me self-empting my heart unwillingly
Paraded, scattered, floated
And in abundance of lust I died many times
No doubt my sweet pains suffered
Love flood Pulsating heart stiffened
Dreams crossed between grey depths of time
Despite all, my selfish wings succeeded
And flied without being rebellious to the comments
Of dollar earned hearts and plastic coated thoughts
Many times

But I did not ache more because
The spirit of my words did not separate me
Turned to me touched and cares me
Cleaned my way to delight all the way
And not left me alone in the crowd
To be abused many times.
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I am in the crowd
Silent, lonely without music and shadow
Only cold and iced being cowered many times
No doubt I was lost, melted and roasted
Ruined neglected and treated as a dustbin
Many times

I lost my voices, life smell
The green dust of my sandy roads that I had
To greet the glow of purest one
In the depth of darkness I was scared
And shaken remain unanswered
No doubt many times

All I did own and taken into granted
For the selfish wish of time
With my tears and smiles
Though I knew that it was not of mine
But I bleed up and accepted it many times

Divine depth drifted away
Brooks inside my heart became hollow and dark
Happy soul lost her wings
Taking this chance my mortal friend stood up
And warned!! Hey you are not musing with poetry
Only juggling with words, a juggler of encyclopaedia
Only to confuse, he cursed me in his pride

I made my creation blind, pained inside, punished
 To mock at me self-empting my heart unwillingly
Paraded, scattered, floated
And in abundance of lust I died many times
No doubt my sweet pains suffered
Love flood Pulsating heart stiffened
Dreams crossed between grey depths of time
Despite all, my selfish wings succeeded
And flied without being rebellious to the comments
Of dollar earned hearts and plastic coated thoughts
Many times

But I did not ache more because
The spirit of my words did not separate me
Turned to me touched and cares me
Cleaned my way to delight all the way
And not left me alone in the crowd
To be abused many times.
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Submitted on May 21, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme a BCDEFD GHIJKD ELMND OAPQRST UREDKVLEWXD YRROBD BCDEFD GHIJKD ELMND OAPQRST UREDKVLEWXD YRROBD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 3,166
Words 570
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 6, 5, 7, 11, 8, 6, 6, 5, 7, 11, 8

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