Analysis of The Rusted Gate



I watch you slip away each day, as you
stare out beyond the rusted gate, that swings
back and forth from winter winds, that blow
snowflakes in a mindless dance.
Your face is lacking expressions of life I
once knew.
Now all I see is a shell waiting for time
to end this cruel fate you suffer from
within.
I'll remember our talks and the life we had
as friends.
Spring has come again, I fixed that rusted
gate with a new one. It's like life in a way.
We're here and then we're gone. Everything
is replaceable at some point in time.
But the friendship we had will always remain
within my thoughts, like the pages in a book.
I'll remember you always, as being my friend.


Scheme ABCDEAFGHIJKLMFNOP
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011111 1101010111 101110111 100101 11110010111 11 11111011011 1111011101 01 101010100111 11 1110111110 11011111001 11011110 110011101 1010111101 01111010001 10101111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 649
Words 128
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 518
Words per stanza (avg) 128
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Submitted on July 30, 2010

Modified on April 04, 2023

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James M. Rainey

writting poetry, painting, drawing. Enjoy nature walks. being with my grandkids. Retired, but still like working from time to time. I have found that life is best enjoyed sharing with others. The mind is an open door. So many wonders just waiting to enter. all we have to do, is but open that door. Cheers. more…

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