Analysis of The paradise of present



THE PARADISE OF PRESENT
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 Six holes in the flute
 Air passes to dilute
 All the worries and pain
 Released stress and strain
 Gives you a healthy gain

The flute forgive all
 With melodious call
 Forgetting past and future
 In the present paradise

When flute can forgive every
 Wound caused by Others
 Then our heart learns to sing
 Getting a lesson of patience
 To take lovely care of all
 In garden of colorful life

~~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~~


Scheme X AABBB CCXX XXXXCX X
Poetic Form
Metre 010110 1 11001 110101 101001 01101 110101 01011 101001 0101010 001010 11101100 11110 1101111 10010110 1110111 01011001 110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 448
Words 77
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 4, 6, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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