Analysis of The One Heavenly Being



Our whispers fall as
Dust on the wind the
Color of love has changed to gray
We had our golden moments you and I
They have gone somewhere far away
As I look up hopefully at a new day
The value in the valley has come into play
Through salty tears I know what is near
My dreams are still bright and clear
Burning fire in my chest
Soft pink petals fall gently on my breast as
I marvel how good it feels to follow my Heavenly path,
God, finally has his way at last
I look forward to what will come to pass
To feel new again knowing to the end
God has and will always be my friend
As I follow the trail
I will kiss the wounds and nails
I am finally near, I am humble and sincere
The journey to the destination is finally clear as
I give thanks for being, it gives hope a new meaning
I have finally set my sights on
The one Heavenly being!

@22 February 2010


Scheme AXBXBBBCCXAXXXDDXXCAEXE X
Poetic Form
Metre 101011 11010 10111111 11101010101 1111101 11111001011 010001011011 110111111 1111101 1010011 11101101111 110111111011001 110011111 1110111111 1110110101 11011111 111001 1110101 1110011110001 01010010110011 1111101110110 111001111 0110010 100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 827
Words 175
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 23, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 335
Words per stanza (avg) 88
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Poetry is what makes me whole and keeps me sane all at the same time. You are born a poet, a storyteller, it is a part of what you are, a great gift from God. You can be taught to put words on paper, only those with a poet's Soul can make you feel those words deeply! I hope all of you feel me. :-) more…

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