Analysis of The Lord you're crying for, is around you



Need to be spiritual to find Light of Lord
Remove all obstacles being right guard
Spiritual light you searching is very vast
Be spiritual to renew your pledge very fast

The spiritual light wants to see; is in you
But we’re not doing that though is in you
The Lord you're crying for, is around you
Search spiritually as he is in search of you

Realize are born with wings; try to fly high
Not in search and are crawling like a baby
Thinking in what language does He speak?
Language is silence, mutely be in his search

In past I was thinking that I am very clever
But no, not I’m a student of a learning folk
When I die don't to try find me in my Tomb
Not be there try to find me in peoples' hearts.

See silence is not gold but silence is God
Be silence and move, its language of God
Was surprise with my new findings by God?
If follow, will be soon closer to him; I hope!

Being followers of Imam still have to do a lot
Not only do a lot but we have to sacrifice a lot
Without which we’ll not be near to our destiny
Be a leading example which others may quote

Imam has been telling us since decades to do
Are taking it very lightly and half hardheartedly
Our first duty is to help others to set on course
We’re not up to the mark see shaking the globe!


Scheme XXAA BBBB XCXX XXXX DDDX EECX BXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111100011111 0111001011 100011101101 1100010111101 010001111101 1011011101 0111011011 1100001110111 1011111111 10101101010 100110111 1011011011 0111101111010 111101010101 11111111011 11111110101 11011111011 1100111011 1011111011 110111101111 10100110111101 11010111111001 0111111110100 101001011011 101110110111 11011010011 10110111101111 01110111001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,230
Words 251
Sentences 5
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted on August 02, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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