Analysis of The Greener Side



I thought I needed to get away, make my big escape
You weren't what I wanted, it hurt to see your heart break.
There was a whole life out there that I just had to explore
I couldn't go on this way. I just didn't love you anymore.

I saw the tears in your eyes as I told you to go
It tore my heart apart inside but I simply had to know.
What it was like - no commitments, no one to answer to
No one by my side, on my own without you.

I swore the grass was greener on the other side
What I had wasn't what I wanted; my feelings I could not hide.
I tried to let you down gently and be easy on your pride
I just had to make my way over to the greener side.

I partied every night, dated a guy or two
But something wasn't quite the same not like it was with you.
I missed your smile, your laughter, the warmth of your arms
Other guys didn't measure up; I lost interest in their charms.

I swore the grass was greener on the other side
What I had wasn't what I wanted; my feelings I could not hide.
But what I didn't realize was that my feelings had been denied
I never knew that being with you WAS the greener side.


Scheme xxaa bbcc DDdd ccee DDdd
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Metre 11110110111101 11011101111111 11011111111101 110111111101101 1101011111111 111101011110111 11111010111101 11111111011 110111010101 1111011101101111 111111100110111 11111111010101 1101001100111 11010101111111 111111001111 101101011110011 110111010101 1111011101101111 1111010111101101 11011101110101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,088
Words 232
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 169
Words per stanza (avg) 46
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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