Analysis of The Collapse Of An Illusion



The collapse of an illusion is the primary hurt
when you find the one you chose
is a sack of dirt.

The collapse of an illusion is the primary debt
when you find the one you chose
is a losing bet.

The collapse of an illusion is the primary harm
when you find the one you chose
is a false alarm.

The collapse of an illusion is the primary loss
when you find the one you chose
is a sully dross.

The collapse of an illusion is the primary pain
when you find the one you chose
is a bit insane.

The collapse of an illusion is the primary sting
when you find the one you chose
is a ding a ling.

The collapse of an illusion is the primary ache
when you find the one you chose
is a bizarre flake.


Scheme aBa cBc dBd eBe fBf gBg hBh
Poetic Form
Metre 0011101010101 1110111 10111 0011101010101 1110111 10101 0011101010101 1110111 10101 0011101010101 1110111 10101 0011101010101 1110111 10101 0011101010101 1110111 10101 0011101010101 1110111 10011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 667
Words 142
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on February 05, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Wallace Dean LaBenne

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