Analysis of The Candle Burns Red



The Candle Burns Red
The night is but our dreams
Where nothing is what it seems
In a love that is all but dead
While our candle light burns red

Lonesome was our sleep
For the tears that you did weep
When I touched upon your head
As we shared each other's bed

From every dropping tear
My life has become unclear
Our love, might still be saved
Under the candle lights red ray

For just one more chance
I can find our lost romance
If you promise, you will stay
Our candle red will never burn away


Scheme ABBAA CCAA XXXD EEDD
Poetic Form
Metre 01011 0111101 1101111 00111111 11010111 101101 1011111 1110111 1111101 1100101 1110101 1011111 10010111 11111 11110101 1110111 10101110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 476
Words 98
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on July 05, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Norman Wilson

IntroductionForgotten are the times the tick of a clock once chimed sobering sounds that caressed my hearts nightly dreams. As I awaken to the touch of light that burns upon a candles wick flickering my words for all to see. This drives my thoughts through the darkest of nights of loneliness that renders my quill upon parchment with ink that dances to minds and souls.Now I hear the screeching of my heart when the blue horizon covers the orb of emptiness.Within the shelter of my mind with little, purpose other than my words that keep me sane. These are my new poems I have written in the quiet of my night, forever wished away in a writer’s pain. As I strive to write that perfect poem that, my soul desperately seeks. Then and only then can my words rest upon a sleep. more…

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