Analysis of Tempestuous Tide/Timorous Time



Tempestuous tide;timorous time

Pleasure has gone away w/ pleasure-preaching

tempestuous tide;alaknanda night

nightingales cry by the pull of the eastern
 tide;time and tide do not try the wings of

the dying butterflies

arti comes around w/ big,black eyes

so deep,so wide;so exotic,so unkind!

tears trickle down my anguish-eaten insomniac

eyes witnessing her satin-shawl tossing,

turning love rhymes

tempestuous tide;alive she cried deep in the

night feeling the pangs of pleasure betwix

her thighs;she let me touch her,bleed her

near and wide

then suddenly the sky opened up showering

shame,faithlessness upon my bride

whiskey,champagne see,shake,sigh catching the

pride of alaknanda behind her unkind eyes!


Scheme X A X XX B B X X A X C B X D A D C B
Poetic Form
Metre 10011 1011011001010 10011 111011010 101111011 01010 110110011 111101 110111010010 1100010110 1011 100111100 110011101 0111110 101 110001101100 10111 11100 111010011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 694
Words 118
Sentences 2
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 32
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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