Analysis of Take Away and Give Back
My sudden dream becomes a desirer,
When walking miles of love through fire.
The closet of my life begins to close,
Time with you was watching the blooming rose.
Your beauty was found when I was lost,
A day to remember at any cost.
If my love were your thristing gift,
I taste the wind and my feet run swift.
To begin to think we soar in the open air,
Touching our heaven that posses our care.
With you, my life now finally begins,
My demons lose and love always wins.
Shadows of my heart no longer feel dark,
Cause everywhere I looked I felt your spark.
Just when I think I took my last breath,
You kissed me when I had nothing left.
What more can words say to how I feel,
You keep me awake when I taste the steel.
Stand in the shadow and become my guide,
Show me the light that holds what I hide.
Scheme | AABCDEFFAAGGHHIJKKLL |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) Etheree (20%) |
Metre | 11010101 110111110 0101110111 1111100101 110111111 0110101101 11101101 110101111 101111100101 101010110101 1111110001 11010111 111111011 110111111 111111111 111111101 111111111 1110111101 100100111 110111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 778 |
Words | 159 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 20 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 31 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 618 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 159 |
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Submitted on April 28, 2012
Modified on March 05, 2023
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