Analysis of Sunk To The Depths



Hurricane winds increasing, wind jammer keeling
floors becoming ceilings, water takes on new meaning
 ship turns turtle in a flash, all around galley bottles smash
lights black out with a crash, got to get out fast
 day light streaming through an open door
struggle through what is now the floor
body oh so drained and sore
water surging in with a roar
 drowning now a possibility, water rising above my knees
breath beginning to seize, why are they such cruel and callous seas
 sea water now in my lungs, I can taste salt upon my tongue
feel so highly strung, my swan song is now sung
 my life flashes before my very eyes
and I begin to cry
but I don't want to die
someone help, oh please try
 water is now over my head, my prayers have now been said
I think, now I'm surely dead, float to the surface instead
 after what seems an eternity a saviour gives my hand a squeeze
oh God thank you please, I am now so safe and free.


Scheme AABCDDDDEEFFGHHHIIEJ
Poetic Form
Metre 10101011010 1010101011110 111000110110101 11110111111 111011101 10111101 1011101 10100101 1010010010100111 1010111111100101 110101111110111 11101111111 1110011101 010111 111111 11111 10111011111111 11111011101001 1011101000111101 111111111101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 907
Words 176
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 728
Words per stanza (avg) 176
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Submitted on May 27, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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