Analysis of Subconscious Mind
Trying my best to focus
as through one ear i hear rambling
tuning out the the worldly things
no more do i push myself to be social
silence... cease to be here listening
white noise in the background
tuning it out mind crumbling
the greatest fear is the one
ive been thinking of
since this morning....
what a restless night
tossing and turning
an extremely disturbing
tone....
left me sad and no where to turn?
so gone jumping high to sky
crossing both fingers
hoping everything is fine!
but, no you constantly drifting
and im stranded....
here somewhat listening
as through one ear i hear rambling
tuning out the worldly things!
pushing all away as my mind steady scambling.
Scheme | aBcdbebfgbhbbijklmbnbBcb |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011110 11111110 10100101 1111111110 101111100 11001 10111100 0101101 11101 1110 10101 10010 1010010 1 11101111 1110111 10110 101011 11110010 0110 111100 11111110 1010101 10101111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 651 |
Words | 119 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 24 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 536 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 119 |
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Submitted on May 01, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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