Analysis of Standing There

Angela Crabtree 1982 (maine)



When I left you standing there...
 A tear of joy stammered near...
 When I left you standing there...
 I drove away with a smile to bare...
 When I left you standing there...
 A thought crossed my mind with whom no one to share...

When I left you standing there...
 You told me you'd always be near...
 When I left you standing there...
 You told me you loved me and we'd soon be scared...
 When I left you standing there...
 My heart felt shame, and cold and bare...

When I left you standing there...
 I knew in my heart it was time to share...
 When I left you standing there...
 I knew that I loved you and wanted you near...
 When I left you standing there...
 My tears of joy turned instantly to fear...
 So I left you standing there...

©By: Angela M. Crabtree
 December 16, 2004


Scheme AbAaAa AbAxAa AaAbAba xx
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 011111 1111101 110110111 1111101 01111111111 1111101 1111111 1111101 11111101111 1111101 11110101 1111101 1101111111 1111101 11111101011 1111101 1111110011 1111101 110011 010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 782
Words 148
Sentences 21
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 7, 2
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Angela Crabtree

Angela Crabtree is a woman in long-term recovery who started writing in 1996 as a form of emotional release. She uses her life experiences as inspiration for pieces. Angela believes in her ability to draw you into the emotion behind the poem. Angela believes in giving back to her community by advocating for those who need it. She is a member of the MaineMOM Advisory Council. She has done Training with Maine’s Department of Health and Human Services (DHHS) Office of Behavioral Health OPTIONS (Overdose Prevention Through Intensive Outreach, Naloxone, and Safety) program. Angela is a mom, aunt, sister, daughter, student, and more. She believes in helping professionals understand the disease of addiction and how it works. She has faced stigma and unfair treatment in active use and recovery. Her passions are photography, writing, spending time with her family, and art. She continues to display integrity despite the stigma she faces. more…

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