Analysis of slow death



Staring At these walls
Lying here waisting time
Not looking forward
To the darkness that's all mine
No one knows the pain I feel
This weight upon my chest
 The crushing down onto my soul
And waiting a slow death
The things I've done
I can not run
This burden I must pay
I've been holding on
The dreams are gone
Let my soul go on it's way
But still I wait
Hear in this room
I am waiting
Impending doom
It's been so long
I don't recall
When I began
This pending fall
If I awake to see days light
I shall take another breath
Remembering the past
And waiting a slow death


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Poetic Form
Metre 10111 10111 11010 1010111 1110111 110111 01011011 010011 0111 1111 110111 11101 0111 1111111 1111 1011 1110 0101 1111 111 1101 1101 11011111 1110101 010001 010011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 542
Words 114
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 447
Words per stanza (avg) 114
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Submitted on August 24, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Joe fritz

The things that i write about are from personal experiences or from my heart, and even from my soul I love to read and write, I also write songs. Many of them more…

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