Analysis of Slipping Away



You seem to be lifting and shifting.
I feel you drifting away.

You seem to be gliding and hiding.
I feel you sliding away.

You seem to be flowing and going.
I feel you blowing away.

You seem to be creeping and leaping.
I feel you sweeping away.

You seem to be stunning and shunning.
I feel you running away.

You seem to be voting and gloating.
I feel you floating away.

You seem to be tipping and gripping.
I feel you slipping away.


Scheme AB AB AB AB AB AB AB
Poetic Form
Metre 111110010 1111001 111110010 1111001 111110010 1111001 111110010 1111001 111110010 1111001 111110010 1111001 111110010 1111001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 419
Words 84
Sentences 14
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 48
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted on February 05, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Wallace Dean LaBenne

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