Analysis of Slap In The Face




“A liar, a coward, and a cheat you are,
For when you stood at the gates of hell,
You ran when you should have stood.
Never have I been so let down by you,
Even in all that you have done in life,
A liar, a coward, and a cheat you are.”
I have never denied what I once was,
And what I am today is the same to you.
You were not there to see the truth,
Or know what it is that I had done.
I have never denied the lies I lived,
Nor did I try and excuse the cheating.
But when I stood toe to toe with that man,
The one that you accused me of being,
Well then, the coward from now on I will be.
But know this, with the hate in your heart,
That has consumed your heart in every way;
 You will find that life is never as easy as,
The forgiveness that has blinded you with hate!
I find now that the cycle was never broken,
So when I made a stand against my father,
I know that I was a coward, a liar, and a cheat.
So when life catches up with you, you will find,
The hate that has consumed your heart and soul,
Will lead you down this very same road.

Rîchård Açévédø
5/19/13


Scheme AxxbxAxbxcxdxdexxxxcxxxxx ex
Poetic Form
Metre 01001000111 111110111 1111111 1011111111 1001111101 01001000111 1110011111 01110110111 10111101 111111111 1110010111 1111001010 1111111111 0111011110 11010111111 111101011 11011101001 111111101101 00101110111 111101011010 11110101110 11111010010001 11110111111 0111011101 111111011 111011 1
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,059
Words 228
Sentences 10
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 25, 2
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 403
Words per stanza (avg) 113
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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