Analysis of Siren Eyes



lonely night butterfly flies
moon rises;arti cries!
champagne and nicotine,nudity smiles
loneliness,loneliness,loneliness rhymes
Mississippi rises Ganges subside
Smile on her face`s fading
Lips so full and ripe
Eyes wide shut breasts burst open all of
Heaven`s archive
O dearest arti,why you cry?!
bees and butterflies swim and shine
tears of unknown sadness trickle down your
dark,big,black,exotic,eastern eyes
I`m lost,I`m so,so lost in your love`s shrine
I kiss your tears
You invite me w/ your prayers;I start crying
now;and then you penetrate me with big,dark
black,eastern,exotic Siren Eyes!!!


Scheme AABCDEFGHIJKAJLEEA
Poetic Form
Metre 101101 111 01011 11 010101001 110110 11101 111111011 11 110111 1010101 1101101011 11 11110111 1111 101110011110 11110111 1101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 582
Words 103
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 490
Words per stanza (avg) 87
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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