Analysis of Sinking



And it stains your skin,
Kills a skipping step,
An anchored heart splinters,
Blinded acetone burn.

Message through the dusk,
Afterthought but overmedicated,
Please start caring,
Insides of ash write symphonies.

Hush to a caress,
Green hands beckon the daylight,
Stomach turns to lead,
A rusty, unridden bike.

Resentment geared at core,
Sediments of better days restrain,
Perfect wooden floors mean nothing,
You're wasted on me.


Scheme XXAX XBCA ABBX XXCX
Poetic Form
Metre 01111 10101 11011 10101 10101 1011 1110 01111100 11001 111001 10111 01011 010111 100110101 01101110 11011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 412
Words 66
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Akira Dawn

I just thought it would be interesting to get a little feedback on what I write. It is often quite abstract and truly not great (this is not my self-deprecation shining through), but I would really love to improve.I am inspired by the works of Mark Twain in particular, he is amongst the wisest men ever to have lived. more…

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