Analysis of Silent but for...



As I sit on the swing
Darkness envelopes me
As the pale moon rises into the night sky

Silent but for the creaking of the swing,
Moving rhythmically back and fourth.
Silent but for the grasshopper chirping,
Crying to be heard by and by.
Silent but for the dancing of the breeze,
Pushing past the bare brush and branches.
Silent but for the deer sprinting,
Rustling the bramble and leaves.
Silent but for the moring dove taken flight,
Cooing its mournful song to the stars.

As I sit on the swing
Emptiness fills me
As the flames of life flicker only just so...


Scheme Abc axacxxaxxx Abx
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 10101 10111001011 1011010101 10100101 101101010 10111101 1011010101 101011010 10110110 1001001 10110101101 101101101 111101 10011 10111101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 543
Words 103
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 10, 3
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 148
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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