Analysis of Silent Awareness
My cover is blown…has been for some time
Though I've denied; God, I am so obvious!
And you are so right – I'm sure everyone knows.
And you are so right – My pain always shows.
How to expect another's respect
When they know inside what I try to hide?
So, nothing is said, and on I go
Thinking I'm good because you're not in the know.
That is a lie and, between you and I,
I'm ashamed and to blame, never the same.
So blunt to confront; being it so,
I've found my moment and I'm letting it go.
Now I see your eyes on me.
That's all I need for my soul to bleed
And cleanse the dirt that causes my hurt
Because I won't lose the ones that I choose
To help heal my heart;
To make a new start.
Don't go away.
I want to stay.
Jampoet Sept 2011
Scheme | XXAAXXBBXXBBXXXXCCDD X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101111111 11011111100 0111111101 011111111 110101001 1110111111 110110111 10110111001 1101001101 1010111001 111011011 11110011011 1111111 111111111 010111011 0111101111 11111 11011 1101 1111 11 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 721 |
Words | 153 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 20, 1 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 274 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 77 |
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Submitted on October 15, 2012
Modified on March 05, 2023
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