Analysis of Shut down



Blackness, death its right around the corner.
One last breath until you're a goner.
You live a life that isn't that pleasing,
and it's all coming back to get you.
Breath deep, breath hard.
This is your ending.
It's the last chance to say that your sorry.
If not, then the blade is coming down.
You will be history.
So before I shut you down,
tell me the truth.
Why did you ruin my life slowly?


Scheme AABCDBEFEFGE
Poetic Form
Metre 1011101010 111011010 1101110110 011101111 1111 11110 1011111110 111011101 111100 1011111 1101 111101110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 382
Words 76
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 299
Words per stanza (avg) 76
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Rebecca Yoakem

The first 5 poems are from the poetry.com archives just as a heads up. I started writing poetry around the age of 8. I've been published in a little known book when I was in jr. high. I have also written for a few other non profit organizations as far as an adoption story (if I could find the poem I would post it). Basically, I just started to pick up writing again. If my poetry seems dark or confusing, sorry but that's how I am sometimes. I may throw a few "happy" curve balls. Btw, I am far from being emo or scene or any of those terms, I am just passionate about my writing. more…

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