Analysis of Scribbles (II)—The Trash Can



It’s a simple trash can
that draws my attention
on this cold morning
when words once more
are fleeing.

Wrist bent, balled paper held,
“It’s a bird, it’s a plane”
tossed, landing inside,
“It’s superman!”

There’s nothing remarkable
about its appearance,
molded of white plastic,
sleek sides, rounded lip,
liner held with elastic.

Wrist bent, balled paper held
“She shoots, she scores!”
tossed, landing inside,
“The crowd roars!”

It sits in the corner
across the room
catching discarded rhyme
on paper balls, crinkled,
filling up in time.

Wrist bent, balled paper held,
“She flies through the air
with the greatest of ease…”
tossed, bouncing off, missed.


Scheme xabxb CxDa xxexe CfDf xxgcg Cxxx
Poetic Form
Metre 101011 111010 11110 1111 110 111101 101101 11001 1100 1100100 011010 101110 11101 1011010 111101 1111 11001 011 110010 0101 100101 11011 10101 111101 11101 101011 11011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 657
Words 109
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 5, 4, 5, 4
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 84
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on January 27, 2011

Modified on April 17, 2023

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Debra Squyres

I am a small town, Louisiana, Country Girl. Girl being the operative word...I'm now 51.Simply an amateur writer writing from life experiences. My vocabulary is not that of a scholar, but a simple country girl.ATTENTION: According to a blog post early this morning on April 13th, 2011 from LuLu..which has as of 2:35 pm cst been removed, this poetry site will be closing. All poets were asked to save their poems. I will miss the friends I've made here as well as reading the poems. I did confirm this on the LuLu facebook page. There publishing site at LuLu.com will still be open for business using your same login name and password.Best of Luck to each of you !! God Bless. more…

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