Analysis of Sad Times
Last year
in mid-june; in core summer
while the sun was shinning
and other hopes were rising
her heart was broken
cos he wasn't down no more
her source of love
smashed against a rock
shattered to a million pieces
it could not contain
no empathy she could find
no comfort she could absorb
so she went by the seas shores
and sat on a cliffy rock
where there is solace
so the waves can empathise with her
and the tides can bring her good tidings
and she felt tranquillity
only when she cried a million tears
every drop encased tearfully
in it, a fragment of her heart
dropping into the sea
ripples insignificant
mixing with the sea
from salt unto salt
joining the ocean stream
flowing into oblivion
lost in the mysteries
and wonders of the endless blue
now she has no heart
her feelings have been speared
her emotions have been pierced
her sentiments sheared
that she loves no more
she gives compassion no more
though there is healing
but her heart did not heal
now she stands in the middle
where feelings don't give
she can take but she won't barter
not even an ounce of emotion
not for anything
not for anything!
David Justin Abraham © 2013
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11 0110110 10111 0101010 01110 1110111 0111 10101 10101010 11101 1100111 1101101 1111011 011011 11110 1011110 001110110 0111 101110101 100101100 01010101 100101 100100 10101 11101 100101 10010100 100100 01010101 11111 010111 0010111 01001 11111 1101011 11110 101111 1110010 11011 11111110 110111010 1110 1110 101010 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,097 |
Words | 211 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 12, 11, 11, 9, 1 |
Lines Amount | 44 |
Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 184 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 42 |
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Submitted on May 08, 2015
Modified on March 05, 2023
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