Analysis of Relaxation's Delicate Whispers
As light catches the stretch of invitation in the dawn's glance I find her embrace,
beautiful quiet warmth inside the throes of cool spiralled freedom,
buxom splendour lifts up the spirit's wild colour,
I'm overwhelmed by life's wondrous scent and love's passionate wisdom,
the world's soft activity is lost within silent folds of her magical face,
sentimental kisses reach for rhythm's ardour.
Answers are found in sighs
while personalities sweep minds
into the realms of excitement's fresh possibility.
Sensuality's pulse we will swirl fine memory within and forever chase,
eternity's a fingertip away in history's chasm,
blossoms of sweet humanity twirl with fervour;
enthusiastic steps across the wings of a brand new poem,
this spellbound melodic time of fluttered simplicity we will never erase,
our bodies seek the quality of nature.
Deeper meanings find eyes;
as furious as loving winds
which lift us cleanly into Heaven's vast garden gently.
Ghostly moans roam above relaxation's delicate whispers of buttered content,
fragments of reality merge with fantasy as we return to the present.
Scheme | ABCBAC DXE ABCBAC DXE XX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1110011010001111001 100101010111110 1011101011 101111010110010 01101001101101101001 010101111 101101 1010011 01011110100 1111111000100101 101001010010 10110100111 001010101101110 1101011100100111001 101010100110 101011 11001101 11110011011010 10110111001011010 101101110011011010 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,077 |
Words | 171 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 3, 6, 3, 2 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 45 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 179 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 34 |
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Submitted on September 22, 2010
Modified on March 05, 2023
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