We Watched The Air



All the dreams we entertained with laughter,
they seem so close now as feathers wrap us
in gentle colours; merged bright beautiful
passions and sweet delicate desires.

On the tips of our tongues freedom danced love,
such fragrant wonder assailed our senses
as we kissed sorrow's softly rolling sigh
into the heaven's guarded light: sparkles
of curious angels; their songs open
notes calling home the innocent spirits.

Hearts wept wings of delight and fine sadness
as we watched the air shiver our goodbye,
whispers of symphonies stroked strings; vibrant
chords bounced around eternity's promise.

And now - our hands roaming each other's fire,
miniature wisps of together slide souls
across the breadth between the present's smile.

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Submitted on September 10, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXX XXCXXX BCXB AXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 714
Words 116
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 4, 3

Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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