Analysis of Rain scene



The rain was pouring down and she still wanted to go to the beach
she was anywhere and no where
a place with no home was her home.
It was a dark and grey day. This beach called Ocean City was now deserted and empty since the rain had inhabited everything. Everything was cold and wet, but she was fine with that because that’s how her heart felt. Cold and wet. Her dark hair flowed past her chest and halfway down her back the rain made it look even darker than it actually was. She was her two-piece swimsuit of a dark violet, with a loose jacket of blood red over it. It didn’t help much because the rain had soaked everything on her. She got up and started walking away she never looked back because she had nothing to really say. But one time did she glance by. A young boy not risking another goodbye. “Wait!” He cried. Faster she walked, she tried. “Don’t leave” He cried. If only she could just believe.


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Characters 921
Words 175
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 4
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 178
Words per line (avg) 44
Letters per stanza (avg) 710
Words per stanza (avg) 174
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Submitted on April 18, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Syrelia

I believe that there is a time for everything and some things can be expressed through poetry I come from a different family and things are different everywhere. I believe poems can be gateways into the mind, what we cannot say but wish to say it anyway so badly and so words change but the meaning will forever stay the same.I write as my hands allow me, word after word. Ink following the shadows of my paper begging me silently to write more.These are my poems. more…

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